Lletres: A Life Divided. Criticize.

:
I am yours
you are me
with this world
in between
on our way
to a dream
everything feels incomplete

and I criticize my heaven
god and his beautiful angels
must be something
they forgot today
the most important date
on their schedule

hold the line
don?t give up
keep my words inside the dark
let it rain
for a while
hope the sun brings back your smile

heaven knows
?cause he sees
heaven?s gay
as it seems
doesn?t care
doesn?t move
got no single word
for me and you